來(lái)源:網(wǎng)絡(luò)資源 2021-09-07 11:27:48
假如你是Kate,今天發(fā)生了一些不開(kāi)心的事,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示以“An unlucky day”為題,寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。
要點(diǎn):1.因?yàn)轸[鐘沒(méi)有響,早上起床晚了;
2.沒(méi)趕上校車(chē),不得不步行去上學(xué);
3.到校后,老師讓交家庭作業(yè)時(shí),才發(fā)現(xiàn)作業(yè)落在了家里;
4.文章結(jié)尾進(jìn)行總結(jié):糟糕的一天。
An unlucky day
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參考范文
An unlucky day
I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off. When I woke up, it was 7:10. So I washed my face quickly and ran to the bus stop without breakfast. By the time I got there,the school bus had already gone. I missed it. So I had to walk to school. Finally, when I got to school, it was already 9:10. I was late for class. When the teacher asked for my homework, I found I had left it at home. What a bad day it was!
【解析】
【詳解】1.題干解讀:本篇材料作文要求以Kate的身份,用第一人稱(chēng)的方式講述不開(kāi)心的一天;講述過(guò)去的事情,用一般過(guò)去時(shí);書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意用全所給材料,文句通順,內(nèi)容完整。
2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng):本例文按時(shí)間順序got up late this morning…7:10….By the time I got there,…when I got to school…When the teacher asked for my homework講述今天發(fā)生過(guò)不愉快的事情,文字表達(dá)清楚,內(nèi)容完整連貫。
3.高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):get up late;wash my face quickly ;run to the bus stop without breakfast;be late for class.;ask for;leave it at home
句型:原因狀語(yǔ)從句I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off.;
時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句By the time I got there, the school bus had already gone;
賓語(yǔ)從句When the teacher asked for my homework, I found I had left it at home;
感嘆句What a bad day it was!
【點(diǎn)睛】本篇是材料作文,書(shū)寫(xiě)前要認(rèn)真他閱讀題干,了解題干的要求,敘述發(fā)生過(guò)的事情用一般過(guò)去式時(shí);書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要圍繞題干提示的要點(diǎn),按時(shí)間順序、有條理地講述自己不幸的一天。
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