實(shí)例解析中考英語(yǔ)作文給分原則

       2008年中考英語(yǔ)作文題目：

　　Write at least 60 words about the topic “Love around me”. (以“我身邊的愛(ài)”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名以及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分)(總分16分)

　　Use the following points as a guide. (短文須包含下列要點(diǎn))

　　Is there any love around you? (Give one or two examples.)

　　How do you feel when you get love from him/ her/ them?

　　What are you going to do to show your love?

　　-----------------------------以上為背景------------------------------------

　　下面我將為大家分享在這個(gè)題目下的幾篇有特點(diǎn)的學(xué)生作文，附實(shí)際得分和我的點(diǎn)評(píng)。

　　說(shuō)明：由于是前幾年的作文了，這里面的作文在其他網(wǎng)上也能搜到。拿出來(lái)分享一個(gè)是會(huì)加上我的點(diǎn)評(píng)，這個(gè)是網(wǎng)上搜不到的，另一個(gè)也是希望孩子們更明確作文的寫(xiě)法和得高分的要素。

　　第一篇：

　　I live on a planet which is full of love. I can get love form my teachers, friends and my parents. When I get love from them, I feel warm and happy. They are the most important people in my life. I should show my love to them. I will help my parents to do some housework if they are tired. I will help my friends when they are in trouble. I should show my love to the person who gives me love.

　　【實(shí)際得分情況：5+6+1=12】
 

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